Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?
In recent years, visitors of museums and historical houses are often tourists rather than local people. In this essay, I would discuss several noticeable reasons of this issue before some practical measures are drawn.
The first reason of this problem is that tourists love to visit museums and historical sites to understand the history and traditional values of particular regions that they visit including beliefs, customs and cuisine while local inhabitants are too familiar with the culture of an area where they were born and grown up. In addition, the layout of historical images is likely to remain unchanged for long periods so that the locals are not fond of it because they visited these places at least once in their youth life.
To attract more local residents to these locations, the easiest way is that local authorities should celebrate social events at museums and ancient houses in special time like The Independent Day or Tet holiday. The authorities can also consider accepting the locals to hold important occasions in their life such as wedding festivities or anniversaries in the historical places. As a result, they could attract substantial public attention to historical values. Moreover, another resolution is that infrastructure of museums and historical houses need be improved frequently.
In conclusion, the number of local people who come to historical images will increase gradually if some viable solutions via the way to celebrate social events and infrastructure improvement of ancient houses are completely implemented.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, while, at least, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4262295082 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84057492354 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622950819672 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.5149266778 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.111111111 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1111111111 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356764342408 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128842103824 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554820038209 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185255866306 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642512484951 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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