Museums are integral and plays an important role in preserving the national treasures of a nation. There are various museums around the globe which provide a glimpse of the past and many other artifacts and paintings. Whilst, some museums are free to visit. On the other hand, some charge for the entry in the museum. Yes, according to my point of view there are more merits of charging an entry fee rather than demerits.
Firstly, museums are public property, so these are managed by the government authorities. there are rarely any museums which are privately owned by families or individuals. For management and for organizing events funds are required and these funds are arranged by the entry fee which is payed by the visitors.
Moreover, sites such as museums are a great source of revenue for the government which is spent on the development of the country. In addition, museums attracts tourists from different parts of the world. The money paid for the admission by the tourists also contributes a share for the improvement of nations economy. For instance, in a country like India where tourism is significant for country's economy revenue from museums is very crucial.
However, there are those who believe that if the museums will charge some amount for admission. It will decrease the number of people attending museums. Furthermore, this also leads to lowering of the values of the artifacts and those artifacts and other precious objects will be ruined.
From the above discussion it cam be concluded that museums are very important and tells today's people about the life of their ancestors. These museums also require some care which is only possible museum authorities charge people for admission.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.279874213836 0.247107183377 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.141509433962 0.155533422707 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0691823899371 0.0946595960268 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0408805031447 0.0501214627716 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0125786163522 0.0437548338989 29% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.141509433962 0.122226691241 116% => OK
Participles: 0.0440251572327 0.0403226058552 109% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.67219124984 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00943396226415 0.0326793684256 29% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.12893081761 0.0861772015684 150% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00943396226415 0.021408717616 44% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0220125786164 0.011925033212 185% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1738.0 1933.35771543 90% => OK
No of words: 283.0 316.048096192 90% => OK
Chars per words: 6.14134275618 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.367491166078 0.374742101984 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.30035335689 0.28420135186 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.201413427562 0.203846283523 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.134275618375 0.137316102897 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67219124984 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.037074148 87% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540636042403 0.56093040696 96% => OK
Word variations: 54.5962082407 60.7387585426 90% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.6470588235 20.7743622355 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0784441547 49.517814964 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.235294118 127.492653851 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6470588235 20.7743622355 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.764705882353 0.814263465372 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 46.6823945126 49.1944974215 95% => OK
Elegance: 2.38709677419 1.69124875643 141% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.474674807894 0.332605444948 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.115891778251 0.102741220458 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0479961055176 0.0668466124924 72% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.579355807045 0.534860350844 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.11525580808 0.148594505496 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194665333548 0.134430193775 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627757939274 0.0742795772207 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.31800784036 0.324371583561 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0188997869053 0.0638462369009 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308407758138 0.228012699653 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497673959222 0.058150111329 86% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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