Many offenders commit more crime after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening and what measures can be taken to tackle this?
Punishment is often given in order to make the offenders realise their mistake and to improve their nature for the future. However, it is noticed that after serving punishment many first-time offenders commit more crimes.
There can be many reasons behind increase in the number of offences by first time offenders. Firstly, the rehabilitation program through which may prisoners undergo does not contain any thing which can make these offenders realise that their actions were wrong. Simply putting them under a roof and preventing them from use of any facilities doesn’t help them realise of their wrong doing. Moreover, these first time offenders often get in touch with regular prisoners, which make the situation even worse. First time offenders often get carried away with them and instead of spending the time in jail for improving themselves, they start to learn different ways to commit crime and how to get away with it.
However, for every problem there are solutions similarly, these problems can also be tackled. Firstly, education should be provided to prisoners, especially to those who are first time offenders. Education can help them improve by understanding how they are liable for their own actions. Free books based on law and order should be distributed among the prisoners. Secondly, there should be separate prison for first time offenders and the government should try to keep them away from regular offenders so that no one can come in the way of improving them.
In conclusion, it is true that many fist time offenders commit more crimes after punishments due to lack in the rehabilitation program or because of the company. However, it is also true these problems can overcome with proper education and proper distribution of prisoners.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
... may prisoners undergo does not contain any thing which can make these offenders realise ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22996515679 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64768931596 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515679442509 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1803587715 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.214285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199617722332 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846598097362 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756403583956 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143912387728 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281021195563 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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