It is generally observed that criminals after releasing from prison tends to involve in more criminal activities, this can be happened due to lack of rehabilitation or some strong consequences toward it. Therefore, government and society must play a vital role to solve this problem.
In the one hand, this problem can take place due to various reason. Firstly, due to lack of money they may involve in commeting crime rapidly, for instance, in the prison criminal may face lots of negative consequences and loneliness and to get out of it they may start involving in taking drugs, which is only possible with money. However, they may commit more crimes to fulfill their unwanted needs. Secondly, due to lack of rehabilitation they can repeat crimes also in the prison they may have a company with lots of criminals who had committed more and dangerous crimes and due to them people can be influenced and attempt more crimes.
In the other hand, to solve their negative attitude toward repeating crimes, their should be bigger role of government as well as society by providing them a good rehabilitation and treating them in a polite manner.Likewise, more number of training should be their for criminals, for example, hove to do craft work and also tacking part on social works which can be beneficial for them in future by getting job in specific feld and this will also help them to forget their past. However, society should also play a role for criminals betterment. They should encourage criminals by positive and strong consequences rather than dominating them. This will help criminal to get their self confidence back and to live a prosperous lifestyle.
To conclude, criminals may commit more number of crimes after serving the first punishment. Therefore, this can be solved in a positive manner by giving them knowledge about how they can make their life better once again.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...a good rehabilitation and treating them in a polite manner.Likewise, more number of training shoul...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Likewise
...on and treating them in a polite manner.Likewise, more number of training should be thei...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e to do craft work and also tacking part on social works which can be beneficial ...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a positive manner" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...nishment. Therefore, this can be solved in a positive manner by giving them knowledge about how they...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, likewise, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00632911392 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72792886603 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506329113924 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.881620234 49.4020404114 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 131.833333333 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247519443562 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112777688552 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844373990876 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192178992171 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834917376017 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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