Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The prevalence of crimes has never been anything less than a major concern of all societies. To some extent, an increase in the crime rate, more or less, is caused by ex-prisoners re-offending after the first imprisonment. In this essay, the reasons behind this phenomenon as well as measures will be discussed.
First and foremost, failed accommodation secure could lead to an unsuccessful reintegration. After serving the first punishment, ex-offenders would more likely to return to their previous community where neighbors have already known them before and would exercise reasonable precautions because of perception about prisoners. Hence, ex-prisoners with predominantly unforgiving feelings would opt for leave and fail to find another accommodation aftermath because of a lack of capital. Additionally, employment is a crucial factor which gives ex-felons such a huge chance of rehabilitation. Though, prisoners, before post-release, often not be trained or educated enough to meet the needs of employers, which indirectly creates the barriers to employment.
For the failed accommodation finding reason, it could be solved by improving housing options for ex-prisoners. Prison administrators should have sorts of housing agreement with house owners or apartment administrators for low-income prisoners after being released, which guarantees stable accommodation for a short period. Yet, another measure for unemployment is that authorities should provide educational opportunities or vocational training that would collectively improve odds of employment.
In conclusion, deepened understanding of the reasons and pragmatic measures would put a decline on the re-offended rate of ex-prisoners, which will lower the crime proportion and bring higher safety to society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.98046875 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38532627083 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6640625 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5386353152 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.583333333 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180403405211 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676177745849 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051916732055 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113728698388 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460570085552 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.4 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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