One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that many buildings are a part of a country's history and it is protected by law. But some individuals thought that these buildings should be pull down and build new one. This essay will further elaborate the importance of these buildings for any nation in the following paragraphs.
To commence with, there is a deluges of arguments in favour of that ancient buildings should be preserved. The most preponderant one is that buildings offers an insight into a country's past. To elaborate it, in modern era with the help of these buildings nations ancient history become a way more accessible to understand. It plays an important role for education department because they can easily teach their students about there ancestors. These building teach valuable lessons like what material they had used to construct their buildings, how they lived and it put positive impact on students mind. They can easily acquire the history of there nation in practical way. That is why higher authorities made strict rules and regulation to protect these kind of buildings. Because these are the building blocks of nations history. Not only this but it also helps to boost economy of country. This is because popularity of these buildings attract tourists. When they visit these buildings they shell out their money on tickets and other expenses like commuting. That directly put positive impact on the economy of nation. For instance the study results published by the government of Australia in March 2014 and April 2016 clearly indicates that old buildings should be protected with strict rules and regulation that are initiated by higher authorities and it is crucial and critical for the development of the nation upcoming generation.
However, there are some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the potential benefits of above-mentioned views by providing reliable justifications. They claim that due to the rise in population it become very hard to find place for living. It will rise up continue, in order to deal with this problem these must be pull down and form a new one for populace. Hence, it is clear why many people consider it as a positive development.
To conclude, having pondered over above stated it is crystal clear that despite some drawbacks the benefits of old buildings for nations history and for upcoming generation are indeed too great, to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pulled'?
Suggestion: pulled
... thought that these buildings should be pull down and build new one. This essay will...
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Line 2, column 19, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are a deluges'?
Suggestion: there are a deluges
...ollowing paragraphs. To commence with, there is a deluges of arguments in favour of that ancient ...
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Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a deluge' or simply 'deluges'?
Suggestion: a deluge; deluges
...paragraphs. To commence with, there is a deluges of arguments in favour of that ancient ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t into a countrys past. To elaborate it, in modern era with the help of these bui...
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Line 2, column 750, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... strict rules and regulation to protect these kind of buildings. Because these are the bui...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ion to protect these kind of buildings. Because these are the building blocks of nation...
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Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...m that due to the rise in population it become very hard to find place for living. It ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2063.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0687960688 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70353795447 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 646.2 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2119084808 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2380952381 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.380952381 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415715641818 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117013512017 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748440786017 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243878374393 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976435556483 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.