Many parents believe that children should play team sports like football, basketball and so on, instead of individual sport such as swimming or running during the school scheduled timetable. Does u agree?
While many parents believe that children should focus purely on team sports during the school time, I am of the opinion that both team and individual sports like swimming or badminton are great choices for children
On the one hand, team sports are necessary for the development of children. Firstly, these can give players the opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, known as communication and teamwork skills. playing games with other children will enhance child's day-to-day interactions, which would be far-reaching benefit them in their workplace. team sport also help them to feel sympathy with the other . Furthermore, sports of team develop a sense of unity, friendship and sportsmanship between team mates. children would feel a part of something, which add value to their lives.
On the other hand, individual sports such as running, swimming or tennis can bring them numerous benefits. these sports not only enhance their personal skills but also develop a strong mindset. Indeed, children are able to mange emotions, cope with stress and so on. Winning a competition or just a match can build their confidence and self-esteem, which is the motivation to bring them overcome any setbacks they may face. By setting goals and achieving personal bests for sports, they can learn to challenge themselves and get into success.
In conclusion, sports in general speaking are helpful for children. Depend on what sport you choose to play, it will develop different merits and I think children should play the sport they like in order to have fun in school time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, while, i think, in conclusion, in general, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21960784314 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68899565486 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603921568627 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9623155819 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.384615385 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326673087349 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107236054512 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108013101719 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233792638943 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118525235 0.056905535591 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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