Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older, while others think they should stay at home with the family. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Whether or not youngsters are to remain or exit homes when they mature has become a question under contention among parents. While a majority agrees they should stay to ensure their security and health, however, others hold the opinion that leaving home to other cities is better, to enable them face the competitive world and secure good jobs.
On the one hand, proponents of adolescents remaining, even when they are up to age argue that they are safer and healthier at home. This is because ones’ homes constitute of family members and kindred who love themselves and would not endanger the lives of their own. Young adults and adults alike are completely assured of being save at home. Furthermore, the fact that food sources are mostly natural, means that people consume majorly balanced diet, not processed food. Consequently, they are free from diseases such as cancer, which is mostly caused by eating junks. To give a clear example, a report concluded that the healthiest people on earth are the ones who consume organic diets.
On the contrary, others believe that adolescents should vacate homes once they are adults to cities where they would be faced with competition from age mates, as well as enable them be gainfully employed. Leaving home for cities to meet different people from all walks of life means one would be challenged to succeed by comparing oneself with mates and striving to compete with them. Also, there are enormous job opportunities in the cities. People can gain employment easily in multinational corporations and earn good living from it when they leave in cities.
In conclusion, while most parents accept their younger ones stay at home for safety and to good health, others, prefer they leave for cities to face the world and live a quality life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: Whether
Whether or not youngsters are to remain or exit homes ...
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Line 4, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...face the world and live a quality life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98666666667 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.465441137 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3076923077 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.076923077 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355067968374 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116012860539 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684207926472 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217487470516 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364844647063 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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