Some people say that increase in cars is the major problem in cites, while others believe there are other serious problem in the cities.
What makes up a major problem in cities is now a contestable argument among people.There are some who cite the enormous growth in the use of private vehicles being the most challenging issue, while others believe that other factors such as overcrowding and poor road infrastructure are more serious. In my opinion, the latter view is more a serious issue than the former.
On the one hand,proponents that excessive number of cars is the fiercest issue negating cities argue that its use has caused a number of road traffic accident and air pollution.To begin, most of the drivers of these vehicles do not actually have driving license permitting them to drive, and at such are not professional in it, which indicates the ability to understand traffic signs and rules is lacking, with accidents being the result.Moreover, air pollution is now a concern, because majority of these cars are not road worthy and produce enormous exhaust fumes which saturate the air with carbon-monoxide. To illustrate, a recent research concluded that by the year 2030, majority of city inhabitants would develop lung diseases due to atmospheric contamination.
On the other hand, others hold the believe that overpopulation and dilapidated nature of the roads are more serious an issue in cities than just increase in private cars. This is because, migration of people in search of greener pastures is alarming, which has led to cities becoming densely populated, so bringing about issues such as unemployment and epidemic of communicable diseases.Furthermore, the challenges of poor state of city roads cannot be overemphasize, since citizens cannot safely commute without being involved in accident,as a result, scores of persons have lost their lives in this.
In conclusion, those that argue that greater number of vehicles are serious issues facing cities agree because of the resultant traffic hazards and pollution, while others, myself included, believe that increase in population and the inadequacy of the roads are of major issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31366459627 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07988899388 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568322981366 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 170.639852273 49.4020404114 345% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 244.428571429 106.682146367 229% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.0 20.7667163134 222% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.1428571429 7.06120827912 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21214521525 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105146070491 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949672776772 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135582540366 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764242453224 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.6 13.0946893788 203% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 16.33 50.2224549098 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.41 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.53 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.