Many parents (mostly women) decide to stay home and take care of family members instead of going out for work. What are the causes and effects of this phenomenon?
Nowadays, most of the parents, particularly women choose to look after the offsprings as well as other members in family, instead of working. These are two main causes and also two key impacts which will be outlined below.
The main reason stemming from this issue is full affection for children. Warmth and affection are expressed by parents to their children that result in life-long positive outcomes for a better future. Higher self-esteem, improved academic performance, better parent-child communication and behaviour problems have linked to this type of strong fondness. The second key reason is to manage daily chores. Household needs, maintained by the homemaker, would make home guest-ready at any time. Women, traditionally, stay at home to cook, clean and take care of children.
Regarding the effect felt by family, possibly the main impacts is well-developed children. When parenting is done well by mother, not only do children have a good personality both physically and emotionally but also can create a strong bond with parents, these show the positive benefits. Turning to other main influences on parenting are the happy family life. Since the home is well-organised, all needs in family members are well-affected. it can be described as a feeling of pleasure and enjoyment.
To wrap things up, the desire for children and household-managed chores are the crucial causes behind this trend. The result on the offspring and family members involve well advanced children and pleasant family course.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, regarding, second, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38075313808 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96766889999 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619246861925 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6651723849 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7333333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9333333333 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225666377525 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070019185208 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543090904997 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127521521741 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260301917491 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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