In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is this happening? How should they be punished?
Juvenile delinquency has obviously witnessed an upward trend recently in many countries all over the world. There are an array of reasons behind this phenomenon and several punishments can be adopted to stamp out the problem.
There are two major reasons why there has been an increase in the rate of crimes which are conducted by adolescents. What holds the utmost importance is the consequence of social issue and poverty. To be more specific, poor living standard tends to push people into resorting to property-triggered crime namely burglary or shoplifting. Besides, the lack of education is also a contributor for an increasing number of teenagers committing crimes. It is a fact that parents who are always on the go with work are less likely to give their children proper care and fail to direct them on the right path. Hence, the child might become poor prepared and educated for the obstacles in life and be easily tempted into breaking the laws by bad peers.
In my opinion, children and teenagers who demonstrates gross misconducts have to be strictly punished. Firstly, despite the severity of the unlawful actions, young violators should be penalized in the same manner to adults, as in imprisonment, which deters potential young criminals from violating the law. Besides, they should be granted less privilege when their penalty is over. Secondly, parents should spare more time instructing their children morally by delivering ethical lessons, or they can ask children’s peers to report suspicious behaviors at school so that timely measures can be adopted to preclude the worst case scenario.
In a nutshell, it is clear that teenagers turning to a career of crime is an alarming phenomenon and parents should be the ones involving in children’s life and providing them correct life guidance
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 122, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'arrays'?
Suggestion: arrays
...ntries all over the world. There are an array of reasons behind this phenomenon and s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17627118644 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91042959066 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0301460182 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.461538462 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275649834678 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793718762359 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044574308493 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141499462963 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351957875965 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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