All around the world, problem related to crime by people with different age groups especially, young generation increased at rocket speed. Plethora of factors are responsible for committing crimes by youth. Through this essay, I shall embark light on those elements and suggest some sort of punishment for children according to their psychology that help them to alter their thinking.
Nodoubt, children of 21 centuries, committed crimes much higher than the past decade due to ample of reasons. The primary one is the impact of modern technology such as network, movies that are full of aggressive actions is the most important factor of crime that enforce the teenagers to take part in such kind of activities. According to child psychology, it has been proved by famous psychologist named Jean Piaget that children in adolescent age become more aggressive in nature and depressed. Due to this reason they commit crime
In addition to this, lack of experience among them is the another factor that plays crucial role in it. Without thinking positive or negative results children immidiately modify their ideas into actions. As a result, face hardles in life when they follow wrong track.
Children in teen age nodoubt, are aggressive in nature still, there are possible solutions to cope up with such kind of youngster. The primary one is to tackle them in a polite manner as well as by council them about merits and demerits of committing crimes. Beside it, making their time schedule so hectic by providing them plethora of inspirational books to read when arrested as a punishment so that they broden their horizon in an optimistic manner.
To make it crown, I pen down saying that, nodoubt, there are plethora of reasons for crimes especially in young generation may be due to lack of experience or their behavior. Still, problem related to this can be overcome by council them and by providing them good reading material to change their minds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, still, well, in addition, kind of, sort of, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05864197531 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61817733122 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586419753086 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4603384755 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.071428571 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118956496727 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406156367005 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0218739648008 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0623797762863 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295319851638 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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