In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is this happening? How should they be punished?
It is true that child and young criminals has been escalating rapidly in all over the world. Innovative information technology and poor parenting care with lack of proper guidance would be the indispensable reason behind that. However, the best way to tackle this problem such as advanced support and strict control over certain activities in the modern gadget and juvenile court may have right to follow up and guide them through appropriate case study.
To begin with, excess criminality in youth mind would be the result of broken families and increased use of modern technology. In other words, new generations are tend to concentrate internet services more precisely and seem to act and behave as seen in computers in real life. For example, violence and offensive movies and documentaries are hiking and young people have had the temptations to be practical in their daily life by the effect of game like "Blue whale". Furthermore, single parent or divorces would be another cause, which may inhibit the reasonable care and affection from either parents or siblings. By the virtue of that, children s tend to more focus on other activities or communicate with strangers may taint their mind and behaviour in some extent.
Proper punishment to the appropriate time would be inevitable in such cases. Government should make legislation over young criminals rather than send to sentence such as apply penalty those who use adult site with excess violence. In addition, identify dodgers and punish them rather do chastisement to the toddlers. Moreover, sending child and young custodians to juvenile homes and give adorable education and assessment. For instance, young culprit from rape case recently send to adolescent home make confess over his crime and have had better academic in school.
In conclusion, applying penalty to the young offenders would be inevitable since giving punishment in terms of discipline and correction services and control in needs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29841269841 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76178799242 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1047070148 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.214285714 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104640773782 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365115190183 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0237082968022 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0622136787881 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00864230126327 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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