In many parts of the world, people search for family history. Some people think that finding for the previous generations is a thing to do, but others think that it is better to be focus on present and future generations. Discuss both views and show your opinion.
family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background: rgb(255, 255, 255);">A majority of people believes that searching for family history is critical while the other supposed that it is the present and future generations are what should be focused on. there is family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background: rgb(255, 255, 255);">plenty of (ideas - đếm được; a great deal of - uncounted noun)family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background: rgb(255, 255, 255);"> contrasting ideas on this issue.family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background: rgb(255, 255, 255);">
family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background: rgb(255, 255, 255);">To begin with, finding for the previous generations is good, but living with that past is not. family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background: rgb(255, 255, 255);">peoplefamily: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background: rgb(255, 255, 255);"> cannot family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background: rgb(255, 255, 255);">influencefamily: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background: rgb(255, 255, 255);"> the past, whereas family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background: rgb(255, 255, 255);">the presentfamily: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background: rgb(255, 255, 255);"> and future are what human can family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background: rgb(255, 255, 255);">be affectedfamily: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background: rgb(255, 255, 255);"> and changed. if only focusing family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background: rgb(255, 255, 255);">on historyfamily: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background: rgb(255, 255, 255);"> but forgetting reality, the future will not be the same. there are many cases when people are so obsessed with family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background: rgb(255, 255, 255);">family historyfamily: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background: rgb(255, 255, 255);"> and resulted in ignoring the present and future. Because of that reason, people should not regard the previous generations and abandon family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background: rgb(255, 255, 255);">othersfamily: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background: rgb(255, 255, 255);">.family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background: rgb(255, 255, 255);">
family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background: rgb(255, 255, 255);">On the other hand, history is something that is bounded within each person and cannot be denied. knowing about the previous generations of the family is the way of keeping on the traditional values, and mental values. For example, family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background: rgb(255, 255, 255);">a handmade lanternfamily: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background: rgb(255, 255, 255);"> from China is an family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background: rgb(255, 255, 255);">extraordinaryfamily: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background: rgb(255, 255, 255);"> work of art, and the secret of making the lantern is descended by generations up to now. Therefore, if there is no family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background: rgb(255, 255, 255);">curiosityfamily: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background: rgb(255, 255, 255);"> about this secret, nobody learnt from the previous generations, then the method of making traditional Chinese family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background: rgb(255, 255, 255);"> lanternsfamily: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background: rgb(255, 255, 255);"> would be passed away. Furthermore, by learning from the past, human will gain experience and may not make the same mistake.family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background: rgb(255, 255, 255);">
family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background: rgb(255, 255, 255);">In conclusion, I deem that it is important to know about the past generation, but it does not mean obsessing with the history and neglecting the present and the future.family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background: rgb(255, 255, 255);">
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, so, then, therefore, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 5222.0 1615.20841683 323% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 751.0 315.596192385 238% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.9533954727 5.12529762239 136% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.23491921734 4.20363070211 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.34883912593 2.80592935109 155% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.231691078562 0.561755894193 41% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1136.7 506.74238477 224% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 75.0 20.2975951904 370% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 291.017800143 49.4020404114 589% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 522.2 106.682146367 489% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 75.1 20.7667163134 362% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.4 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0236730850699 0.244688304435 10% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381506895735 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485388248793 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0237761276042 0.151304729494 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159622467707 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 48.9 13.0946893788 373% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.81 50.2224549098 8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 22.9 7.44779559118 307% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.4 11.3001002004 278% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 24.21 12.4159519038 195% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 33.5 9.78957915832 342% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.0 10.1190380762 316% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 32.0 10.7795591182 297% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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