The unlimited use of cars may cause many problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce the problems, should we discourage people to use cars?
The invention of cars has brought new trend of transporting to the human kind for century. However, the tremendous car use also accompanies several problems to the society.
The more cars are used, the more problems arise. One of those is the environmental issue. It has been common knowledge that the exhaust fume produced by car is one contribution to the air pollution and green house gas emissions. Additionally, car overuses creates a huge amount of traffic jam in the rush hours in big cities like London or Shanghai. Another crucial issue brought by cars is safety. The number of people dead by car accidents recorded every year is approximately 1.3 million people on world wild scale. This is alarming.
As many would believe that if the use of cars reduces, the problems addressed by it will also decrease. However, it cannot be denied how useful car is to individual daily life and it is hard to imagine a life without it. Therefore, I think there are other solutions that can be applied. Car manufacturers can produce electricity car or cars that are friendly to the environment. Moreover, governments can build more undergrounds infrastructure like railways or roads to reduce the traffic jam.
So, in conclusion, discouraging car use may solved the problem but it is not the best option for the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 416, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'undergrounds'' or 'underground's'?
Suggestion: undergrounds'; underground's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92825112108 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89379810034 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 106.607317073 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62331838565 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3682023582 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.2666666667 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8666666667 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334069228611 0.215688989381 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1055621113 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789467486452 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21329239567 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333807427695 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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