Famine caused by lank of enough food is a worldwide concern. Food shortage for people is a problem in many countries. Natural disasters and political issues are among the main reasons for this problem. Being ready for emergencies and using modern farming could be some measures.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 1.0 24.0651302605 4% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 41.998997996 5% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 192.0 1615.20841683 12% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 36.0 315.596192385 11% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.44948974278 4.20363070211 58% => The fourth root words length is low.
Word Length SD: 2.5495097568 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 32.0 176.041082164 18% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.888888888889 0.561755894193 158% => OK
syllable_count: 60.3 506.74238477 12% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 13.4907375632 49.4020404114 27% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.0 106.682146367 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.0 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 7.06120827912 9% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114611110617 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819996264544 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465219053149 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114611110617 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 13.0 78.4519038076 17% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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