Many people aim to acheive balance their work and life but only a few get succeed why is this?
Suggest some ways to bring the balance.
Everyone has desire to balance their personal and professional life. However, it is acheived by small number of individuals. Hectic schedule and poor time management are responsible for imbalance in life, whereas balanced lifestyle is possible by implementing solutions.
First and foremost reason for imbalance life is busy schedule. In this competative era, people have to do work for longer hour to achieve success. Therefore, they have limited time hour for themselves and family. For instance, they barely have dinner together due to busy work life. Moreover, they fail to manage their time and spend most of the time on social media rather than concentrating on work or exercise. They do less communication with their family. Thus, these reasons are responsible for imbalanced lifestyle.
There are number of solutions to overcome this problem. Firstly, there should be limited working hours in everywhere. In this way, they can equally utilise their time on work and family. For example, in the USA since the working hours have been limited to 40 hours a week. Hence, the majority of people are able to balnace their lifestyle. Furthermore, time management should be learnt by people. Thus, they would spend their time on productive things as they may engage in any phisical activity instead of virtual world. As a result, they would socialized, , eventually a balanced life.
To conclude, despite having reasons this problem can be solved by limited working hours, and proper time management. Therfore, people can not face any problem in their personal and professional life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29249011858 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73516662422 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553359683794 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4643405164 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.95 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.65 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197674769352 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699050616267 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538348862921 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139623976345 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372657715342 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.51 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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