In recent years, the way of living in urban areas are standardized as compared to rural areas. This may create problems of overpopulation and pollution in cities. However, some measures should be taken to overcome this problem. This essay will discuss in the subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, a large number of people settle in cities for living high standard, it may create problem of overpopulation in urban areas, and the living cost has increased there. For instance, the rent for accommodate in cities are double as compared to villages. Moreover, where individual's counting more, definately the pollution is also more there. To explain it, pollution is inclined by using more vehicles there. For example, Delhi is a capital of India. The largest number of people live there for retaining high income salary, and the pollution is also in the highest amount there by using transportations. As a result, if only cities provide better life then, it enhance more issues as pollution and population.
However, there are number of sollutions to overcome this problem. Firstly government should provide more jobs in rural areas. They can establish factories there, so that villagers will no have to go in cities for emplyment. Secondly, better education system can be reduced this problem. To exemplify, it was surveyed last year that 80 students had to go in urban areas for higher education. Thus, more emplyment method and better study system can be become village better for living.
To conclude, although problems are created in cities for living high standard, rural areas can also become good place by providing better opportunities of emplyment and study.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ubsequent paragraphs. First of all, a large number of people settle in cities for living high...
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Line 3, column 673, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'enhances'?
Suggestion: enhances
...nly cities provide better life then, it enhance more issues as pollution and population...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, as for, for example, for instance, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2037037037 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7474916856 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52962962963 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9674207068 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0555555556 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20873412458 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745496590473 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655682206856 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157916275696 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526588984446 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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