Increased rate of crime menacing the human society terrifies a considerable number of people, which even hesitate to leave their house. Therefore, a great deal of people believe that crime should be prevented with more actions while others suggest that little action can be enough to limit crimes.
On the one hand, more strict measures can prevent crimes commited in the society. Increased number of police officers and guards protecting cities and public facilities can deter a considerable number of possible offenders. This will provide the sense of being safe from offenders which can murder, rob or jeopardize our community by different ways.
On the other hand, strict measures may prevent people to sense freedom. High level of surveillance can irritate citizens as they are always being watched by a great deal of police officers guarding city. Moreover, existence of guards everywhere may always remind the risk of crime. It is also believed that existence of current surveillance cameras, highly developed technological equipment and guards is enough to prevent crime.
I believe that taking little action to tackle the issue is more preferable. Firstly, citizens can entertain and live freely with their family and friends if there are less procedures to enter and leave certain areas without extra protection. Furthermore, being observed by a plethora of guardians around their streets can negatively affect the psychology of people. Additionally, today’s technology provides various opportunities to track criminals without any need for the extra police forces walking around.
To conclude, however a great deal of actions can decrease the rate of crime, it is likely to be limit the freedom of citizens and menace their psychological state. Therefore, I believe little action can be sufficient to stop crime as existing security forces possess various modern technological equipment to utilize.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun procedures is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45791245791 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77102945204 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6990315861 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.066666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394701849822 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134305001327 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113415758592 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237515161309 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119663165914 0.056905535591 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.