A group of people believe that the newspapers can be more preferable way to acquire information about the actual topics. However, the other group assume that the online media excels at providing relevant news to the society. I unbiasedly believe that obtaining information from the internet sources is more advantageous in terms of price, effectiveness and amount of the reachable information.
On the one hand, it is commonly maintained that newspapers are prepared by the reputable media tycoons. Therefore, more reliable information can be acquired from the newspapers as they are prepared by professional journalists along with being attentively checked and edited. Moreover, traditional media forms are thought to be easier to use for senior groups of the society as they can find it arduous to use smartphones or computers.
On the other hand, electronic media is considered the best source for news as it provides access to unlimited amount of data from the various websites. Furthermore, while the newspapers have certain price determined by the media companies, reaching the information from the internet is free of charge. Additionally, only a few clicks are enough to search on the internet for the required information. Moreover, the internet browsers provide the “search” function which can highlight the necessary parts of the article including the mentioned keywords, resulting in finding the essential information even more quickly.
To conclude, in spite of the fact that newspapers are carefully designed and closer to the older part of the public, large amounts of data existing on the internet and the opportunities that modern technologies provide to browse faster make digital news platforms much more effective and preferable.
- People across the world are more similar than they are different To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at 73
- Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects Discuss both views and give your opinion 67
- Some people think that when a person travels into a different culture they should adapt to the local practices and customs To what extent do you agree 78
- Some people say that children given pocket money every week will have lesser money problems when they become adults Do you agree or disagree 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 300, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rms much more effective and preferable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, moreover, so, therefore, while, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46691176471 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02741001469 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5634288883 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.181818182 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116328928119 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510190459924 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445012002015 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0711251827795 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281637538476 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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