Many people are copying celebrities from magazines and on TV. Why is it happening? Do you think it is good idea to copy celebrities?
In contemporary settings, famous personalities become hot potatoes of current trends especially regards to youngsters. By follow this, plenty of individuals mimic fashion trends and all aspects of such personalities with which they become interact via magazines and television. There are numerous aspects which are responsible for this criteria. According to my outlook, it is not superior manner to follow such fame stars. Both view points are explained in forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, in present modern era, most of people include all age groups who follow on going trends especially related to popular personalities which involved their dressing fashion, lifestyle hacks and such facts are become in contact with individuals via magazines and tv programmes. There are numerous aspects due to which this criteria has occurred and also proliferate. First and foremost reason is their luxurious and wealthy lifestyle. Due to their such fashion style life hacks, people become interact towards them and such media stars become ideal for them. As a result, masses follow their trends in all manners. Another major factor is due to their fan following base. Youngsters become intact towards them and mimic their fashion hacks to proliferate their fan club. Hence, this criteria also goes toward enhancement in popularity and respect in society which follows similar manner of fame of media stars.
On other hand, there are number of adverse impacts which are shown on youngsters and all generation decades, by follow their preferable personality. Firstly, major aspect is physical issues. Because, there are numerous children whose affection towards their favourable celebrity is in hilarious manner. Due to which, they perform such dangerous stunts at home under none of supervision. As a result, they face physical injurious situations. Another surprising impact is based on criminal cases. There are plenty of young people who are admire from movies via which they become in contact with offence cases which are done by their favourite personality. Hence, they try to mimic such offences in society due to which they become stuck in catastrophic situations.
To recapitulate, I personally consider that, although going trends make individuals to followed their preferable stars, however, this also have negative impression on society and life of individuals too in plethora of manners.
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also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, so, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2030.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48648648649 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74608958977 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518918918919 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 632.7 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.6654585346 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2727272727 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.037554084848 0.244688304435 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0105650376283 0.084324248473 13% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0215114732298 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0211332881455 0.151304729494 14% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0154040545006 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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