Many people are optimistic about the 21st century and expect scientists to make positive changes to the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with their optimism? What changes would you like to see in the new century?
there is no doubt that optimism toward the 21st century and its viability to enhance the natural is wonderful. While some people consider that it is a good change, an opposing point of view have shown that not all of this change are positive. In my opinion, there are still room for development and problem remained unsolved.
The continued improvement accelerates industrialization but meanwhile lead to environment">environmental degradation. Accompanied by technology development, many problems, such as over-exploiting of natural resources, intense use of artificial fertilizer, reliance on deforestation and auto mobile have been arisen and intensified. Even worse, little progress have been made to tackle the problem, possibly because implementing environment">environmentally friendly policies acting as deterrent impede the energy-intensive industry. that is why the use of petrol continues to climb despite the fact that several of renewable energy have been discovered or invented.
On the other hand, the development of technology also open new opportunities for human kind, especially to the environment. A good example would be a water filtration system or environment">environmentally friendly cars. As a predictable outcome, the environment would recover from damage caused by society over the last few decades. Furthermore, the decrease of emission emitted into the atmosphere due to the environment">environmentally friendly inventions is remarkable. Thus, enhancing society or other sectors are also considered as positive alter . Consequently, almost any beneficial deed is contributing to the planet are positive. However, the changes in environment and medicine are more appreciable.
In conclusion, optimism toward the 21st century for a significantly changes is possible but not all change are considered as positive change.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, still, thus, while, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.11278195489 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.8273041959 2.80592935109 172% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639097744361 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7561856246 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.4 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115951017281 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402392612901 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608495436821 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100597589351 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084645605246 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.38 50.2224549098 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.86 12.4159519038 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.