Many people are taught to push themselves and try hard to be better than their classmates, rather than work together for everyone’s benefits. Do the disadvantages of training students to be competitive outweigh the advantage?
People have different views about whether school should prioritize the competitiveness in attempt to boost the achievement of each student or not. Although this type of training has both positive and negative sides, its disadvantages far outweigh its advantages.
On the one hand, there is a host of reasons why some people believe give preference to competitive training. First of all, the huge competition in education environment is a vital factor of enhancing private skills. An explanation is that students might equip a reservoir of knowledge about a huge range of subjects through process of focusing in learning. Secondly, students who concentrates on their academic programs would excel in study hence achieving greater academic results which is critical for children to reap the fruition in the future.
On the other hand, some highlight demerits of competitive training might bring to children’s progress. The first drawback is the lack of some soft skills such as team work and communication. This may cause the difficulties with some social problems. As a result, children have to deal with isolated life. Moreover, it is easier for them to get some mental problems due to suffering pressure for a long period of time. The likelihood of individuals who being push hard in life becoming easier to get depression and anxiety is incredibly higher than those are not.
In conclusion, although competitiveness in education environment is beneficial to some extent, the demerits are competitive outweigh the merits
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35684647303 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0763150794 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630705394191 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.08143321 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3076923077 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186726178125 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538477936272 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389831527287 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996578617223 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205844943543 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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