Many people are travelling to other countries. Why? Is it a positive or negative development?
World travel have become the trend with the sharply increasing of tourist arrivals in recent years. This growth is the upshot of digital booking service that has brought about positive developments of tourism industry.
Going out of the country used to be unthinkable given to complex procedure, lack of vehicles or expensive price but nowaday, it is changed, thanks for developing of online booking service. With a smartphone which has internet connection, people only have to fill the personal informations and wait a few minutes before get the ticket and permitsion to go abroad from gorvernment (in some special cases), saving a lot of time. With a online booking system, customers can be able to choice departure date many months in advance and service provider will have enough time to coordinate and arrange the vehicle for user, commit that lack of vehicles would be never happened. Moverover and also the best effect of online booking is discount promotion, voucher and sale for events. Customers are haves and have-nots is no longer consideration when travelling abroad is many times cheaper than before. Conveniences of online booking service is the reason for the question: : “why many people are travelling to other countries”.
On the bright side, Tourism industry become the backbone of the economy. The concept of tourism cities is more and more popular when almost all the citizen of these cities can be able to live by tourism. People will built the luxury hotels, amusement parks, restaurents with 3 stars michellin in order to attract tourtists who are willing to to spend a lot of money to enjoy the best experience. For instance, Da Nang city, an attractive destination for international tourists, each year contributes approximately 10% of GDP to Vietnam's economy only by revenue from tourism. In the future, this number can increase and it is the undeniable testament to positive development of International tourism.
To conclusion, many people are travelling to other countries is result of developing of digital booking service and this evolution has boosted economy of the country which focus on tourism development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'would' and 'be'.
Suggestion: would never be
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Suggestion:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'build'
Suggestion: build
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22832369942 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82685872147 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57225433526 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1708323328 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.214285714 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92857142857 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251100868207 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909828127016 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119359771126 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17399198804 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108581853848 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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