Many people are working longer and longer hours. What are the reasons and effects? KHANH - HOMEWORK - MAY 29
Overtime working is now very popular In America, almost 90 percent of America people like to work overtime.. But working overtime for a long time could make a lot of negative impact and affect there biological lock..
There is a lot of meaning and factor for people to work overtime,the first factor is because they belive that if they working hard they would get lot of mony but the thing that they don’t know is “to get more mony the resulst needed to be perfect not just work overtime”.Secondary is they work harder because they think if they work that hard the scheme would be over and they will be free,howerver finish the scheme does not mean the work is over boss always find more job for employees to do.
But this kind of working is not so rare and I think we must give them some solution on rest.if they still working liker this for overtime they would crazy up there head.in the amount that I measure they usually be stroked by work ,in Vietnam we do happen this situation because the guy were working on black company so they often working over night so he eat a lot nodelle and eating on this for a long period make him sick and he just pass down. Arcording to the heathy website working over time is ain’t healthy but if you combine the perfect meal and nice scheldual of working it will bring mostly positive on every people .further more working with snack also good, I belive it will give a lot energy to work over night.
In my summarize I would suggest if you working over the time you need I think that you need to have plan, meal everyday and good wife ofcourse .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... of America people like to work overtime.. But working overtime for a long time co...
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Line 1, column 215, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... impact and affect there biological lock.. There is a lot of meaning and factor ...
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Line 2, column 65, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...g and factor for people to work overtime,the first factor is because they belive tha...
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Line 2, column 272, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Secondary
...d to be perfect not just work overtime”.Secondary is they work harder because they think ...
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Line 2, column 390, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , howerver
...heme would be over and they will be free,howerver finish the scheme does not mean the wor...
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Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be usually
... head.in the amount that I measure they usually be stroked by work ,in Vietnam we do happe...
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Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... measure they usually be stroked by work ,in Vietnam we do happen this situation b...
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Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'eats'.
Suggestion: eats
... so they often working over night so he eat a lot nodelle and eating on this for a ...
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Line 3, column 625, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ll bring mostly positive on every people .further more working with snack also goo...
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Line 4, column 101, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
... you need I think that you need to have plan, meal everyday and good wife ofcourse ....
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Line 4, column 112, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... think that you need to have plan, meal everyday and good wife ofcourse .
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Line 4, column 143, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...an, meal everyday and good wife ofcourse .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41355932203 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28325397661 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508474576271 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 159.389460128 49.4020404114 323% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 217.0 106.682146367 203% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.1666666667 20.7667163134 237% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129888810714 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079309965358 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350122490004 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863501015225 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034525031684 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.9 13.0946893788 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.0 11.3001002004 177% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.19 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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