Many people argue that free public transportation should be available in most major cities What are the advantages and disadvantages of this idea

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Many people argue that free public transportation should be available in most major cities.

What are the advantages and disadvantages of this idea?

Many citizens in most big cities such as Jakarta and Surabaya think that free public vehicles should be accessible in their towns. In this essay, I will explain the positive and negative effects of having the complimentary public transportation facility in major cities.

It is evident that some people in metropolitan areas want their governments to provide complimentary public vehicles. It is required because they work in offices far from their houses, and spend much money in transportation. If the free civil transport is provided, many citizens can use their money for other important things. For example, my friend needs to spend around three billions rupiah on transportation fees when going to the office in the southern side of Jakarta. Because of his house is located in the South Tangerang, he hopes Jakarta government provides free civic monorail trains so that he can use his salary to learn coding.

However, every coin has two sides, and despite the advantage of complementary civic buses and monorail trains, there are some drawbacks too. It increases the number of criminal cases because everyone can access the free public buses and monorail trains. Moreover, maintaining these kind of vehicles will be more difficult due to a lack of money. Our government will a use lot of local taxes to finance us.

In conclusion, free public transport existence has its advantage and disadvantage. On balance, however, I tend to believe it is not a problem if free of charge public transports are available as long as the responsible parties provide identity cards for people that want to use civic transportation without spending their money.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 636, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to code'.
Suggestion: to code
... so that he can use his salary to learn coding. However, every coin has two sides, ...
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Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... monorail trains. Moreover, maintaining these kind of vehicles will be more difficult due ...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17472118959 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84836488453 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594795539033 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2768322018 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.076923077 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264017576633 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899428688876 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806679133581 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175484452531 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099945960517 0.056905535591 176% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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