Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality, high school students are encouraged to make comments or even criticism on their teachers. Others think it will lead to loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and

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Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality, high school students are encouraged to make comments or even criticism on their teachers. Others think it will lead to loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

it is believe that museums should be enjoyable place to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. In this essay i completely agree that museums is to educate is better way educate on place for some reasons.

In the one hand, the merit of museums is to make easier for education. It is because if the museums for educate can add knowledge, experience, direct education, they can know about history use props and relic in museums. For example in museum taman pintar, they make the place and the route for enjoyable place. Besides for education, the people came to museums can feel enjoyable to entertain because in taman pintar the science experiment section, use props can for playing but they can get education too. As result they can get knowledge about history relic, and can for education by playing or just look the relic in museums.

On other hand, the disadvantage of the museums place to entertain people. Because if just for entertain the people can damage, running around, and not guard the relic and property in museums. For example some teacher invite the students for coming to museums but just for comfort, and the students let it go and not control, this is can ruin some relic in museums. As result is they can come to place of museums not just for enjoyable but for education too, in other to the museums safe and they get knowledge.

In this important, they can use the museums place just not for enjoyable and entertain but they should get knowledge. Besides the museums safe, and they can study so good.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it is believe that museums should be enjoy...
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Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
it is believe that museums should be enjoyable place ...
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Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Because if just for entertain the people can damage, running around, and not guar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, look, so, while, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73722627737 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37093730517 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.394160583942 0.561755894193 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.544447317 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8461538462 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0477912988534 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0272585140518 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0144791884765 0.0667982634062 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0350989530192 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208480360477 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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