Unfortunately, nowadays the vast majority of people are using another mode of transportation for traveling rather than cycle. This mode of transportation has a tremendous impact on an individual's health and the environment too. This essay will discuss the reason for this phenomenon and suggest some possible solutions to encourage the masses to use a bicycle in the subsequent paragraphs.
Is it crucial to use a cycle for traveling? Undoubtedly yes. In this fast pace life, people do not have time to use bicycles for traveling as they have to reach on destination quickly. Despite the importance of cycling in life, people use motorcycles and cars for transportation because of less space for separate roads and lack of safety. Further and even more importantly, in some countries such as Delhi, Mumbai has the least space on roads where people can not use the cycle because of risk involvement. Thus, it is not practically right to use this transportation in cities.
Government must encourage citizens to use cycle by constructing new roads for cycling. Besides this, they should spread awareness by advertising the benefits of this eco-friendly way of transportation. By using bicycles people not only enhance their life expectancy but also saves the environment. To epitome, in Amsterdam majority of the people are using bicycles as it is playing an indispensable role in maintaining the environment and also help to decrease carbon dioxide in the atmosphere. Government should provide subsidies for bicycles and they must raise the price of fossil fuels so that people use the minimum. Henceforth, it is mandatory to use cycle to protect the environment and maintain physical fitness too.
To recapitulate, I reaffirm saying that if people use cycles rather than motorcycles and cars they will improve their physical fitness and environmental significance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30976430976 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14971602507 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525252525253 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3099273914 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.133333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205226425944 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767757914106 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298472183592 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133090658931 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220796839815 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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