Many people believe that the gap between rich and poor is widening nowadays, because in the current economic situation the rich become richer while the poor become poorer. What are the problems this situation may cause? What measures can be taken to solve them
In this era of selfishness, people are busy in making money. In efforts of making more and more money, some touches the peak while some are left behind as poor due to lack of opportunities or some other reasons. The central question remain that what problems a wider gap between poor and richer may bring to a nation. This essay will examine the the problems triggered by the gap between poor and richer with possible solutions
Multifarious points can be given to shore up my views. To start with, A country's building infrastructure depends how balanced people are in term of finance. In case of greater gap between poor and richer either there will be big houses or lots of small slums which is not ideal as far as a good infrastructure of a nation is concerned. To be specific, There is a mammoth gap between richer and poor in india which has spelled them being counted among the under develop country
further emphasizing on my point of views, large gap between poor and richer hurts the economy of a particular nation which further may spell economy plunge to a nation. Adding to it, it is next to impossible for poor people to provide higher education to their children as education has gone out of the reach of poor as far money is concern, it will spell more uneducated people on roads fighting their fate.
their are numerous remedies that can be applied to cure this problem. First and foremost , government should come into action and equal opportunities ought to be provided to poor and richer so they both may have equal option to progress. Those who are poor, shell be provided financial help to support their family
To recapitulate, condition of inhabitants portray the condition of a particular nation at international market. Hence. government shell work out of their skin to stable their people financial condition
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'while', 'to start with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.227138643068 0.247107183377 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.159292035398 0.155533422707 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.129793510324 0.0946595960268 137% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0265486725664 0.0501214627716 53% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0412979351032 0.0437548338989 94% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129793510324 0.122226691241 106% => OK
Participles: 0.047197640118 0.0403226058552 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.63166216332 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0501474926254 0.0326793684256 153% => OK
Particles: 0.00294985250737 0.00163938923432 180% => OK
Determiners: 0.0766961651917 0.0861772015684 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0294985250737 0.021408717616 138% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0206489675516 0.011925033212 173% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1846.0 1933.35771543 95% => OK
No of words: 318.0 316.048096192 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80503144654 6.12580529183 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.336477987421 0.374742101984 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.229559748428 0.28420135186 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.14465408805 0.203846283523 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0880503144654 0.137316102897 64% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63166216332 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.037074148 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540880503145 0.56093040696 96% => OK
Word variations: 56.8570455692 60.7387585426 94% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 24.4615384615 20.7743622355 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.9304989762 49.517814964 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.0 127.492653851 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7743622355 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.538461538462 0.814263465372 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 3.99599198397 325% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 47.4175133043 49.1944974215 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.77922077922 1.69124875643 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349005430391 0.332605444948 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.115436552459 0.102741220458 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.090129010672 0.0668466124924 135% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.544817037831 0.534860350844 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.178675035629 0.148594505496 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14734582426 0.134430193775 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105321131025 0.0742795772207 142% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.260485302169 0.324371583561 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0770103817299 0.0638462369009 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212078057512 0.228012699653 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105621683218 0.058150111329 182% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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