over the recent decades, the issue of healthy food and diet has become an essential part of everyday life.while a common opinion is that healthy food and diet should be taught in schools, other people feel that parents should aware their kids about healthy food and diet.i strongly believe that parents should teach their kids about hygienic food and diet.
Generally speaking, there are two prominent reason why people feel that parents should teach their kids about healthy food and diet.Firstly, it is easy to say why people think this idea is essential is because children always follow their parents like as a book.for instance, they smile when they see their parents smile - actually they do the same thing like as their parents and this issue also like that. Secondly, Researches says that children brain development are also rely on their diet. A good illustration is that children who eat healthy food they are more talented than those who are not eating healthy food. Apart from this unhygienic food are also causes for serious illness.
Despite these arguments, there is also a case for the idea that teachers should teach their student about hygienic food and diet. Perhaps the main reason why people are in favour of this idea is because most of the people believe school is the only platform to learning about healthy food and diet.This is because students always willing to learn something from their teachers and they also think teachers are their role model. Furthermore, there is also a aspects is in our county a wide range of parents don't conscious about their kids diet issues. As a result, people feel school is the one and only way.
To sum up, This is the issue which is very relevant in our society and it has become a complex issue with no easy solution. despite arguments to the contrary, I feel that parents should more focused on their kids hygienic food and diet issues.
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- Many people believe that healthy eating and the importance of healthy food should be taught in schools Others say that parents should teach their kids about healthy food and diet Discuss both views and give your opinion with relevant examples 56
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actually, also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, for instance, i feel, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81957186544 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22722961432 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452599388379 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.151226589 49.4020404114 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 143.272727273 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7272727273 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1818181818 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.468788688818 0.244688304435 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176635411686 0.084324248473 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13736748048 0.0667982634062 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.316595022486 0.151304729494 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143540198756 0.056905535591 252% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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