An increasing trend for many people around the world is study abroad. Many commentators are of view that go to abroad for higher education is too beneficial for any students, whereas others opinion the opposite. This essay will examine the positive aspects and drawbacks of this trend and provide my overall opinion.
From an overall perspective, there are a range of advantages of higher education in foreign country. First of all, one of the most obvious of these is students who have decided to go to another country for higher studies they will get a better life style as compered with others students. For instance, After graduation those students might be get a job with handsome salary. Secondly, on a foreign university students can properly utilize their knowledge and talents. As a result they can easily explore their. A further point is that, Students also communicate with different people in all over the world and experienced a new culture.
As every garden has weeds, Similarly there are also some disadvantages. Firstly, the financial difficulties which has the biggest obstacle for international students. Moreover, there is also a pressing issue is after graduation or studies most of the students do not want come back their own country. As a result some people support this issue.
To sum up, it must be said that study abroad has clear advantages and disadvantages. Taking the above into account, it would appear that there are more advantages than disadvantages. So having considered both sides of the issue, i believe that study abroad is undoubtedly a good step.
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also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, whereas, for instance, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09541984733 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78103923806 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599236641221 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5039060351 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4375 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213318571446 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057377185062 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532554732609 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104959486516 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732324528593 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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