Many people believe in the idea of school children wearing a school uniform, but should teachers as well be required to conform to be a dress code?
Wearing casual clothes or uniform at school has been a controversial topic of debate in recent years. Many people think that only students need to wear school uniform, whereas another group of people believe teachers should be required to conform to dress code. For me, it would be better if both wear uniform when they are at school.
On the one hand, uniform is practical. They do not have to think what clothes they have to wear every day, whether it is fasionable or not because it is a only type of clothes they must dress at school. Therefore, wearing uniform will help them save time choosing clothes and do not spend much money on buying them. In addition, all they feel equal in some ways. For examples, a rich kid wearing brand- name clothes at school will make/ cause a big gap between the rich and the poor. Moreover, dressing uniform with their school’s name not only makes them feel proud of their school, but creates school’s brand as well.
On the other hand, casual clothes can make them self- confident and comfortable when they are in their favorite clothes. It offers them freedom of choice about types of clothes such as colours, size and fashions of clothing. Some students can not concentrate on their study when they wear clothes they do not like. Beside that, it also makes school become more colourful and lively.
In conclusion, in my opinion, both teachers and students should wear uniform at school, which outweighs the other part of the topic. Although wearing casual clothes offers them comfort and self-confidence, uniform helps them feel aqual and proud of their school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82310469314 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3357763404 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537906137184 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5795328322 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340481390247 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125629113796 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144732779629 0.0667982634062 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241953950586 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.181237310844 0.056905535591 318% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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