Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons? Solutions to change negative attitudes?
Tourism has been rising over the globe at alarming rate. A recent decades are witness of development in tourism sector. Amid this development there is one phenomenon that has associated with it. In order to phenomenon tourism has negative impact on environment as well as nation. There are not only several reason which are connected with it. But also some possible solutions can be taken. So, I will try to throw light upon effect of tourism and l will try to posit my perspective about it.
To commence with, there are multifarious reason to shore those declaration which link with tourism first and foremost, since, increasing in the number of tourists in nation, it can have adverse impact on the natural environment. For instance, tourism led to increase air contamination because they use private car instead of public transports. In addition, deforestation and extinction of natural habitat of animal process has been increased due to expedition. The another reason related to negative aspect is that the price of goods and things grow up swiftly for local human as with providing facilities to foreign commuters which can not afford by ordinary people.
On the other side of spectrum, there are plethora solutions that has associated with tourism. The predominant step that are taken by government is to continue campaigns to raise the awareness of tourists when they pay a visit to a new hand. Commuters should be encouraged to use the public transport for mitigating the pollution. Another remedy is introducing the green tax on air rates or other which increased the economy of nation as well as halt the tourism at the same time according to people, hotel owner or other should use renewable sources like solar power, wind power to cater the facilities to commuters.
Agglomerating, all the point that I elaborated an above it can be concluded that plethora of negative aspect of tourism has been considered by both government and dwellers of nation and their responsibility to tackle this problem by taking important measures. That is why, I support those view because tourism is the major source of rising the economy or declining the rate of unemployment. Hence, it is more fruitful in my opinion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'decade'?
Suggestion: decade
...er the globe at alarming rate. A recent decades are witness of development in tourism s...
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Line 1, column 300, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
...t as well as nation. There are not only several reason which are connected with it. But also s...
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Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this declaration' or 'those declarations'?
Suggestion: this declaration; those declarations
... there are multifarious reason to shore those declaration which link with tourism first and forem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, well, for instance, in addition, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1854.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03804347826 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81493934333 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551630434783 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.5622763605 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152567192172 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469278086365 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346452582523 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906563601187 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221134268838 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.