Majority of people emphasis on foreigner's tourism has catastrophic development on their culture as well as traditional due to the fact youth adopted their culture. There are a couple of solutions to tackle this dilemma. I will discuss their reason and outcomes this obstacle in upcoming paragraphs.
Despite, international tourism has detrimental effects on their country as well as lifestyle such as traditional and customs. For instance, traveler wear their customary and wear inappropriate cloth which depicts skins which adopted by youth of their provincial and older can not tolerate these type of change. As a result, local people feel uncomfortable when they illustrate this in their own area owing to the fact that they follow their customs.
Furthermore, foreign touristy has a harmful repercussion on their environment. Its influence has continually been noticed that they throw rubbish in their surroundings irresponsibly, which is caused of the water and air pollution.
On the other side, this situation can be improved adoption various kind of solutions which create balance both side. Government should play a paramount role to solve this trouble. Moreover, government should increase the awareness among the foreigners through various media such as roads billboards as well as social site and play advertisement will show country beauty, their importance and rules.
In conclude, although numerous individual believe that foreigners travel brings adverse effects to their community while there are numbers of solutions to solve this dilemma. In my opinion I mentioned prior to government's involvement ought to tackle these adverse attitude and build balance in both sides. Government should have aware to touristy from our culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'foreigners'' or 'foreigner's'?
Suggestion: foreigners'; foreigner's
Majority of people emphasis on foreigners tourism has catastrophic development on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59176029963 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91224934672 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591760299625 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7661880134 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.642857143 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199607802432 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657197094636 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046526721101 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105758604286 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540294302825 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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