Many people believe that international tourism has negative emplacation on their country. What is the reason for it and what can we change the negative. cause and solution
globalization has shrunk the whole world into global village. Where boundries between the nation no longer of that importance, Presently, A huge people think that international tourism has been creating adverse effects on their country. Here i would account some causes and solution for this statement.
On the one hand, First and foremost, International tourism is responsible for the lose of cultural value. For instance,people want to follow international cultural. such as, Technology, games, music, clothing style which make separate for their own traditional value. Beside this, International tourism cause lot of environment pollution and they travel with own transport rather than government transports which make traffic congestion. As regard as, International tourism lead to growing crowd and local people have to faced many problem by global tourism.
On the other hand, There are some remedies for this happening. Hence, foriegn people should follow their own culture and they should not leave their traditional value like as, food, clothes, games and living style which are worthwhile to their futures children.furthermore, these children have automatic follow their own culture. moreover, Government should take proactive step for international tourism. they should make some strict policy to global tourism.
To recapitulate, Global tourism is most of useful to maintain economy status and people have to travel on their limits
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| 2018-06-26 | dandiwal jaspreet | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, moreover, so, while, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72685185185 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99665093699 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62037037037 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.5054569622 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1538461538 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6153846154 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243008713289 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933969139699 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459965300371 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151181588772 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395398281911 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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