Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Others believe that there are health benefits of living in cities.
Discuss both views and give your opinions.
One of the highly controversial issues today relates to whether people can get a healthy lifestyle when living in the city or in the village. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both points of view and explain why I believe that the countryside will encourage a more active lifestyle which is good for people’s health.
There are people who argue that it is convenient for citizens to access modern facilities for medical care. The main reason for believing this is that in most cities, there are various healthcare centers with qualified and professional doctors, people can have a regular check-up so that they can identify health problems at an early stage. In addition, citizens can easily access a wide range of fitness centers in the city for physical activities to limit their sedentary lifestyle. For example, after a hard day of working, city dwellers can hit the gym or go swimming to reduce stress and recharge their batteries.
On the other hand, others believe that individuals benefit from a more active life in the countryside. Firstly, it is much easier to get fresh and organic foods from farmer’s markets or farm shops. It is true that vegetables from local farms are less likely to be affected by pollutants as in urban centers. Moreover, the air quality in the countryside is fresher. The reason is that in the village, there are fewer cars and factories as well as more trees which help to convert carbon dioxide into oxygen.
In conclusion, I believe that both arguments have their merits. On balance, however, I feel that living in the countryside will help people to have a more healthy lifestyle with fresh air and organic foods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88850174216 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59899952454 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7488568983 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.923076923 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284674857115 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921374512535 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780869657831 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183645241618 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870202171124 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.