Many people believe that motorbikes should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?
There is has been a dramatic increase in private transportation around the globe over the last few years. Therefore, it is argued that motorcycles should be disallowed. From my perspective, this idea is reasonable due to its positive impacts on easing the traffic situation.
To begin with, some disadvantages of banning motorbikes can be anticipated. Firstly, it seems that there are no other convenient vehicles whose prices are more affordable than motorbikes. Take Vietnam, a developing nation as an example; there are many products, including cars are yet to be manufactured domestically and car prices are now extortionate for most of the residents. According to statistics, Vietnam’s GDP Per Capita reaches 2,300 USD per year. Meanwhile, a motorcycle’s price is about 1000 USD, meaning that in several months, people can afford one. By contrast, the cheapest model of cars such as Kia Morning is about 1,300 USD, in other words, people have to save their earnings in several years for one.
On the other hand, I positively believe that this approach brings significant benefits to the nation’s transport system. Firstly, the prohibition of this kind of vehicle can lessen chronic traffic congestion in various places, especially, in metropolitan cities. The rate of motorbikes ownership is growing swiftly. Undoubtedly, when the number of cars travelling exceeds the road capacity, traffic jams would happen. Therefore, restricting motorcycles would decrease the traffic volume in crowded areas, reducing traffic chaos. Secondly, it is likely to be full of risk when travelling by motorbikes compared to other vehicles such as cars, or buses. Motorcyclists only have helmets to protect their heads while other body parts are entirely unguarded. If people have an accident, there can be a high possibility of experiencing heavy injuries or even deaths. However, if people sit in their cars which are often made of durable materials providing the necessary safety features, such as steel or fiberglass, it is much safer when accidents occur.
Personally, I strongly believe that using motorcycles in big cities will bring out some problems both for the traffic and the owners’ safety. Therefore, a forbidding on these vehicles are necessary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, kind of, such as, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1909.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40793201133 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00195080316 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626062322946 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3936826215 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.45 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.65 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14564428607 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421030372283 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507588528069 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0736832038094 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291050314638 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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