With the advancement in technology, the number of computers being used in the field of education has increased. Some people believe that there will be no role of teachers in the classroom.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that due to the development and application of computers, the role of teachers would be disappeared. However, I do think that teachers are irreplaceable for some convincing reasons.
On the one hand, I have to admit that computer-based learning has played a virtual role in education. Firstly, it gives students the to personalize learning because they can learn at their convenience. Without physical punishment, learners are free to absorb whatever knowledge and at what time they want. A perfect example is that when I started attending online courses for the eleven grades, it had almost lessons from the very basic to advance level at every official subject in my school and I could gain that knowledge in my own time. Moreover, applying AI in educating seems to be an effective way to save a large amount of cash in the long term compared to the lecture training.
On the other hand, having said that, the role of teachers is irreplaceable. Firstly, studying with a teacher can create human interaction. For most students, lessons that have both interactions and emotions between the learners and the educators give them a higher concentration and excitement when compared with the computer. What is more, teachers respond to students' queries in real time. Some special subjects which require a controlled environment to do the experiments such as chemistry or physics need to be monitored by teachers for safety and better understanding.
In conclusion, although there are valid arguments on both sides, I do believe that the beneficial features of teachers not only can not be replaced by the computer and AI currently but will play an even bigger role in future education
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, moreover, so, in conclusion, such as, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.075 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96189878081 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614285714286 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8088871439 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.307692308 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245436327653 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082955117077 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586345830794 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165780620306 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551855639949 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.