Many people believe that the priority of the government should be to ensure a growing economy. While others believe that the government should focus its efforts on uplifting the less fortunate?
Discuss both views.
A government which promised to work on its citizen's welfare should incoporate the needs that faciliates growth and support of societies different segments. Some people believe the government should prioritize economic growth and others claim that its effort should be on helping backward people of the society. In the following paragraph, both sides of people's opinion about the government will be discussed.
On the one hand, many people consider economic prosperity should be the primary focus because they believe this may positively influence the other public sectors. For instance, government aided sectors which include health care, education, agriculture, and transpotation, might be benefited with steady economic growth. People associate the poor performance of these public sectors to government's feeble economic growth. In addition, this might also enhance the capacity of the government to take care of the people who are less fortunate in the society.
On the other hand, some people think marginalized people who are politically, economically, and socially in a desperate situation, need the government intervention and they emphasize to combine the efforts to upbring these people. The later opinion is consider morally appropriate by many as this provides a basic life support measures and help them to overcome their pathetic situation rather than helping the economic growth which only makes the life of people who already are in better living condiitons.
To conclude, People have difference of opinion of how government should converge their focus either for the economic growth of the country or helping the poor people whose needs are not met. However, Both views are considered logical and acceptable
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56439393939 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76470264103 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55303030303 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6365750525 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.545454545 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349547687777 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14648446726 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923907470999 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226234368284 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0999146196829 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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