Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Information is the most essential and treasured asset in our modern world, where every single detail counts.Information can be categorized based on multiple criteria such as fields,types,sources,depth of the information.It is mandatory to learn and retain information to sustain in a job or to be ahead of others in a race to attain excellence in their life.
It is admirable to see people coming forward and sharing information in different fields, and they feel more good is to share information regarding academic or scientific fields. For example, in the earlier times of human civilization some people learned about farming,fishing and ways to form a permanent settlement ,while others were nomadic tribes.The Information that lead to the formation of a civilized society began with sharing the Vital information related to advancements of techniques and skills in growing crops and learning better hunting skills.
The reason behind others who feel sharing information freely is not appropriate because they treasure those information and they are afraid sharing some information may bring negative effects.If field of medicine is taken as an example, doctors tend to use medical terms which cannot be understood by every one,In order to provide better care and be more flexible in their work space without panicking the patients or Imagine a situation where information to create a gruesome bomb or missile are shared without any restrictions and if it lands in the hands of anti-social people everyone’s life will be in danger,no one wants that to happen.
To conclude,Key role of a person in the cycle of life is to share the information he or she knows, this might help others in constructive ways and indeed help themself to remember or improvise in the known information . While Information that has downturn effect on human society should have restrictions and should not be available to everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Information
...world, where every single detail counts.Information can be categorized based on multiple cr...
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Line 1, column 181, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , types
...ased on multiple criteria such as fields,types,sources,depth of the information.It is ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , depth
...le criteria such as fields,types,sources,depth of the information.It is mandatory to l...
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Suggestion: It
...,types,sources,depth of the information.It is mandatory to learn and retain inform...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , fishing
...zation some people learned about farming,fishing and ways to form a permanent settlement...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... and ways to form a permanent settlement ,while others were nomadic tribes.The Inf...
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Suggestion: The
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Line 3, column 538, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...nd skills in growing crops and learning better hunting skills. The reason behind ot...
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Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'those informations'?
Suggestion: this information; those informations
...s not appropriate because they treasure those information and they are afraid sharing some inform...
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Suggestion: If
... information may bring negative effects.If field of medicine is taken as an exampl...
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Suggestion: , In
... which cannot be understood by every one,In order to provide better care and be mor...
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Suggestion: , no
...people everyone’s life will be in danger,no one wants that to happen. To conclud...
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Suggestion: , Key
...one wants that to happen. To conclude,Key role of a person in the cycle of life i...
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Suggestion: .
...er or improvise in the known information . While Information that has downturn eff...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... should not be available to everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, regarding, so, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31147540984 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28797799038 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593442622951 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 172.417774284 49.4020404114 349% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 270.0 106.682146367 253% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.8333333333 20.7667163134 245% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33086955322 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163642224146 0.084324248473 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634719022955 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194863205215 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520544407804 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.0 13.0946893788 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.27 50.2224549098 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.41 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.