Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society.
To what extent do you agree?
In recent times,The issue on negative effects of social networking sites on society and Individuals had become a topic of discussion.Some people believe that they are boon to society.On the other hand,there are those who argue that it creates huge negative impact on both Individuals and society.In this essay,I will investigate both the hands of the argument and provide my overall opinion
A wide range of use indicates that social networking sites create lot of positive impact on society.perhaps,The main reason why i took a stand on disagreeing with the issue was due to its wide number of application.For instance,students dreaming to pursue graduate studies in abroad can easily find the accommodation and other requirements by surfing over social networking sites.this is because of its wide range of connectivity.As a result student can easily make a contact with the person or organisation.unlike in the past,People now-a-days can easily find their accomidation and other requirements without heading directly to the institution.If social media wasn't developed this vast,The students flying abroad could faced a tough time.
In the other hand there are reasons to disagree with the argument.Online fraud statistics had increased rapidly over the years.For instance, a women cheated about 15 men in the name of love on Facebook and collected large amount of money.Later the women ran-away with all the money she collected from them.this is because of lack of social awareness among users.As a result men filed a case and had no use.If the men could have social awareness they would have not lost such a huge amounts of money
In conclusion,this is most complicated issue with little chance of solution.Overall,I must say that i would agree with the issue of negative impacts of social networking platforms by implementing restrictions over it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37542662116 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36267031262 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580204778157 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 146.0 20.2975951904 719% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 208.0 49.4020404114 421% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 787.5 106.682146367 738% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 146.5 20.7667163134 705% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 33.5 7.06120827912 474% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257080790638 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187399745332 0.084324248473 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370005580513 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153877583981 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0851112221315 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 77.2 13.0946893788 590% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -85.17 50.2224549098 -170% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 61.4 11.3001002004 543% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.11 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 15.03 8.58950901804 175% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 60.4 10.1190380762 597% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 61.0 10.7795591182 566% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.