Many people believe that social networking sites( Such as facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society.
To what extent do you agree?
The purpose of socialising, that is to meet new people has been defeated with the introduction of social networking sites. Although, it allows us to meet new people, it has a negative impact not only individuals but also on society. There are several negative factors of Social networking sites which has impacted the way they think and also to some extent the way they live.
In earlier times socialising was meeting new people, sharing ideas and knowing each other by meeting them in person. Because of these meetings personal connection was established, which tends to stay longer and is definitely stronger than any connects that we make on social networking sites. Also, many fake accounts are created to bully teenagers in their schools and colleges. Children communicating with these strangers by only trusting their profile pictures is very harmful and is the real cause for cyber bullying. I strongly feel that strong bonding can only be established when we meet a person in physical, which can also prevent the individual from getting bullied.
Many fake news gets spread in the social media which instigates a few sections of society, because of which communal riots take place. Also, during the time of elections many political parties pay a hefty amount to digital marking team just to target a specific set of audience in the social media by posting the news, which usually are fake, through which political parties can target votes. Society should always dig dipper in the sources before reacting in any way.
In conclusion, I do believe that there is vast impact of social networking sites such as Facebook on Individuals as well as on society. It is very important to make them realise, to what extent can they let these sites affect their lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much fake news', 'a good deal of fake news'.
Suggestion: Much fake news; A good deal of fake news
...e individual from getting bullied. Many fake news gets spread in the social media which i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02027027027 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53904633676 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584459459459 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0482521868 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.307692308 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225197731977 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885256704592 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111629362673 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16824984242 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124693765489 0.056905535591 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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