Many people believe that social networking sites(such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society.
To what extent do you agree?
In the digital era, it often argued that cutting edge social networks have a devastating impact on society and industrials. I partially agree that they have negative impact, while, I believe that it can brings positive impacts on individuals. In these following paragraphs, I will try to express clearly my position on this view by giving my personal statements
Nowadays, social networks especially, Facebook, Twitter, Instagram are cornerstone of our daily lifestyle. Firstly, communication has never been easier without social media. It means that people can keep in touch with relatives or friends who thousand miles away from them by just pressing a button on Facebook with no cost at all. Secondly, humans are able to find out news, phenomena which happened in another continent by just surfing the social media, like a Twitter or Instagram.
However, social networking sites have started breaking up the relationship. In the current time, people spend enormous time on Internet. Hence, they have no time to visit relatives or friends. As a result their relationship would devastated. Moreover, addiction is another negative affect of the social networks. There is no doubt that most people spend waste hours in front of computer or mobile phones for chatting or posting on Facebook despite of pay attention to their work. For instance, most students and workers failed in their exam or job interview because they spend more time online instead of studying. As a result, social networking sites negative affect to individuals and also community.
In conclusion, although Facebook and such sites are beneficial, I strongly agree with the argument that they have more detrimental effect on both community and the people. I hope that, users will realize it and use this kind of applications judiciously.
- Many people believe that social networking sites such as Facebook have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society To what extent do you agree 84
- The diagrams below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant Write at least 150 words 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28373702422 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79955816008 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636678200692 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8225697279 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4375 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288937883103 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866836441327 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785064040137 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152633984455 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389877165667 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.