Lifestyle had undergone dramatic changes over a couple of decade.Presently,few strata of society claims that more involvement in social sites has negative effect on individual and society.Here,i would like to accord with this given statement.
There are many points to shore up the view.Firstly,excessive use of social site creates lack of moral values in juveniles .To exemplify, juvenile spend their leisure time on social sites such as facebook,whatsapp and so on and they do not spend quality time with their parents.Hence,they are unable to learn moral and cultural values and also creates genration gap between them.Moreover,people do more use of social site instead of meeting with their kith and kins personaly.As a result,people are becoming interovert personality.
Further emphasizing on my point of view,now a days masses do not involved in any physical exercise due to excessive usage of social sites.For example,people do not prefer to do any physical activities and do not like to meet and greet with their family and friends directly.Therefore, people are more becoming lethargic and live unhealthy lifesyle.
Other thinks use of social site had a positive impact also.Initially,social sites reduce time wastage.To exemplify, people do not need to meet thier near and dear ones as they can communicate at any time ,at any place sith each other .As a result,they can do more work in less time.Apart from it, in techno oriented world students can discuss their problem with teacher by using social sites and also get solution of problem in less time.Hence, they will score good marks in their academics.
To recapitulate, excess of every thing has harmful results so people should use social sites in limits.
- Some people think tha it is neccessary to travel to another country to learn about it.other argue that information is available on Tv/internet.Discuss both views with your opinion. 61
- Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society.To what extent do you agree? 61
- Now a days,people are living alone in cities.define reasons behind this trend.Is it positive or negative? 61
- Some people think success in life comes from hard work and determination. Others think money and appearance are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, apart from, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33211678832 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.51351447304 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587591240876 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 157.807984589 49.4020404114 319% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 292.2 106.682146367 274% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.8 20.7667163134 264% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.6 7.06120827912 292% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230144829796 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127432305264 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0259095437924 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127432305264 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259095437924 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.1 13.0946893788 238% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.21 50.2224549098 16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.3001002004 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.75 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 32.0 10.7795591182 297% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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