Many people believe that University students should pay tuition fee in full themselves because they gain education for their won benefits and not for the society Tu to what extent do you agree or disagree

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Many people believe that University students should pay tuition fee in full themselves, because they gain education for their won benefits and not for the society.

Tu to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Paying of tuition fee by government or students has been a common topic of discussion. Some demographics of society opine that full University tuition fee should be paid by learners, owing to the fact that a societal part of that country cannot get advantages by this. Even though submission of whole tuition fee by students might have certain pros, I completely disagree with this notion.

It is fairly easy to comprehend why some people including me are not in harmony with this assertion. This is due to the fact that students who address financial issues in their life, cannot get access to tertiary education. By taking this point into consideration, government should introduce some scholarship policies to underprivileged students or pay their tuition fee so that learnees get efficient education and can extent their horizon. It can be commonly seen that poor children who get benefits of these types of schemes, they would more focus on their study and may be avid in their skills rather than devoting their time to part time jobs to balance their financial crisis. In short, regime's financial support act as a work wonder for changing the life of needy students.

By shedding the light on additional viewpoint that individuals educational or knowledge would not a sport community, which is untrue. It should be noticed by the society that 50% of passionate people emerges from poverty stricken areas. If these masses have reached their goal and become doctor, engineer and business persons, government have not need to seek help from other countries; consequently, it will help to boost the economy of that nation along with its status. Thus, financial assistance by government in student's study not only changed their life but also community also get benefits from their services.

In conclusion, although initially regime have to invest in education without any positive outcome, it will return their worth in future for long term and will stay beneficial for country and its personals.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, so, thus, in conclusion, in short

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14067278287 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69355603876 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590214067278 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.8524172181 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.307692308 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1538461538 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254320838615 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864915349198 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049037306864 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147312450053 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439468015889 0.056905535591 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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