These days more fathers Stays at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work.
what could be the reason for this. do you think this is as positive or negative development.
Going out for working of women's is a common trend these days while fathers are staying at home for their children's upbringing. There are many causative factors are responsible for this and I opine that this is a positive development.
The preponderant reason behind this is in sophisticated scenario generally women's have greater qualifications than their spouse. In this case womens are eligible and have great potential to secure a well paid job like in telemarketing, business, fashion designing and teaching so on. Additionally, women empowerment has great influence on the society; consequently, females are opting for doing job. For instance, in UAE companies give preference to women over man for jobs. It is depend on mutual understanding between couples if females have capability for doing high earning job, she do it and their spouse take care their children at home. In short, females potential of working and movements that try to empower women's status plays a significant role in this trend.
It is a a fairly easy to comprehend that why this perception has a positive impact on the society. Firstly, in this male dominating society this is opportunity for women to strengthen their status in society. When females going to start earning, it is not only enhance the economy of their house but also affect their country's economic growth. Secondly, when women spend their whole day on job there is a father who stay at home with their Juvenile; resultantly, this is better for their children and for their holistic growth which also strengthen the bond of father and child. Thus, this situation help humans to pursue their career along with their children's nourishment by both gender.
In conclusion, the changing role of both sexes in the family are a result of wider changes in the society and I believe these development as positive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: depended
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Suggestion: does
...ability for doing high earning job, she do it and their spouse take care their chi...
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Suggestion: an
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Suggestion: a; a
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Message: Did you mean 'this development' or 'these developments'?
Suggestion: this development; these developments
...er changes in the society and I believe these development as positive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07189542484 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80386824454 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571895424837 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.908118127 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.857142857 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393597351829 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13822146129 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100415507931 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244264160362 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144248478125 0.056905535591 253% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.