Many people believe that the use of new technology improves lives of employees. Other think it's a disadvantage for them. Discuss both point of views and give your opinion.
Technology is one of the most powerful weapon which can be used to change the world. One of the most controversial issues today relates to that, consumption of Advanced advanced technology; is either an advantage or disadvantage for the employees lives. In the further piece of essay, I am going to explore all the dimensions of the given topic through some assertions and examples and shape of my opinion by the end.
The first step to understand that, why some people think that Technology have positive impact on employees? Broadly speaking, the prominent reason is fast production. These new machines are helpful to the Employees as they increase the quantity of the products. Similarly, employees work become easier to some extent. A good illustration is, in a recent study by USA government they found that after introducing new technology in working field of workers their energy became double which might help labourers in reducing their workload.
On the other hand, there are some people who argue the opposite. They believe that, new technologies which are being introduced are creating unemployment. In addition, new machines are taking the place of hand skills. Moreover, automation is another technology which replace human labour. Another foremost reason is that, sometimes a small fault created in machines can harm the working labour. They also think that, there are some machines which are difficult to be used by uneducated people and may create a problem for them. As a result these are reasons which gives negative impact on employees lives.
In conclusion, I tend to believe that, after analysing both the sides the new technologies disadvantages outweigh its advantages for employees lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Advanced
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, broadly speaking, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24275362319 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79624480011 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572463768116 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.9775335762 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4375 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189181205724 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615987101376 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521655743898 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123626475469 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463757340656 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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