Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that this is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. others claim that Men are just as good as women at parenting.write an essay expressing your point of view.
In the current time of technological advancement,one of the most pressing concerns regarding the given topic is that should men and women have equal role in raising the children in most Socities or not?through this essay,I shall explore the same from various aspect in the following paragraphs.
On one side,there is a group of people who believe that women is good in parenting to have the greater role in a raising children as compared to men. They strengthen their viewpoint by claiming that women have strong bonding with our children because most of the women are housewife they are doing household work so she spend more time with our children.women also have patience we can freely share our feeling with mother.Mother also have good communication skills she tell us to behave good in society.Furthermore,most of the children spend our childhood with mother so mother have good understanding about our children.
Contrary to this,there is a group of people who believe that men are just as good as women at parenting he also have equal role in raising children in the society.To make their argument convincing they claim that men give proper restrictions to our children to avoid crime.Father also help our children by giving money for their daily use.Moreover,most of the men are working outside for their children and they kept huge amount of money for the children future life and father also have a greater knowledge related to the education so they treat our children well for their future life.
Nevertheless,weighing both the options, I believe that there is a no single conclusion still, I take this ground that an effective clap requires both use of hands because children need caring from both father and mother and Moreover,Mother Care the children in home and father bring money in the home for the regular use.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0131147541 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09837973799 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498360655738 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 20.2975951904 301% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 151.238354924 49.4020404114 306% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 305.8 106.682146367 287% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.0 20.7667163134 294% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.8 7.06120827912 224% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346282972279 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.213839808871 0.084324248473 254% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994829207692 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203124160196 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876029680502 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.7 13.0946893788 250% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 18.02 50.2224549098 36% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 11.3001002004 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.67 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.1190380762 261% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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