Many people find it difficult to live a healthy life. What are the difficulties they face? What can these people do to become healthier?
In recent years, more people have difficulties leading a healthy lifestyle. This essay will examine the obstacles people face and recommend some solutions to live a healthy life.
The two main problems of struggle to live healthily are busy lifestyle and environmental pollution. Nowadays, the hectic lifestyle force people tending to eat fast food which contains high fat, sugar and low nutrition. There is the main reason for obesity and hearted-related diseases, more and more common. This problem is further compounded when people do not have time to exercise. Also, the environmental problem affects a human's health. For instance, metropolises lead to air pollution, which causes lung-related illnesses; emerging cities raise water pollution, which causes digestive diseases or even cancer.
Thus, to be faced with these challenges, the population can start by adopting better time management skill and pressuring the government into protecting the environment. Individuals might cook healthy food at home and get up early to do exercise before going to work or school. There are many groups to help people gaining more motivation in getting a healthy lifestyle. Moreover, the government needs to impose stricter laws on waste treatment and relocate factories to places far away from residential areas to conservative water and atmosphere. Addition, building more green spaces such as public gardens, parks can increase motivation for citizens to do exercise and breath the fresh air.
In conclusion, busyness and pollution are significant obstacles that prevent people from having healthy living. However, these people can practice to manage their time and take part in government environmental campaigns to protect their health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 428, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...so, the environmental problem affects a humans health. For instance, metropolises lead...
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Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'practice managing'.
Suggestion: practice managing
...althy living. However, these people can practice to manage their time and take part in government ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, thus, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61742424242 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89258803527 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655303030303 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0571151863 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234705569771 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077857225571 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665380704832 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158908071657 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722155678242 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.02 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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