Many people go to university for academic study. More people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. To what extent do you
agree or disagree?
As the result of an increase in the number of university, the chance of having tertiary education is much more bigger, while the number of qulified manual workers is not enough to meet social demands. Personally, I completely agree that we should encourage more people to enroll in vocational trainning, eventhough university graduates is always neccesary for society.
To begin with, There are two primary reasons why following the vocational training is a worthy considering idea for highschool-leaver. Firstly, now that modernization process across the world, more new infastructures is being built which requires a huge number of blue collar workers such as electricians and plumbers. Therefore, finding a job would be easier to a manual worker compare with an graduated student in similar fields. Secondly, because the vocational training take less time than studying university, so it help people lessen the burden of finance. For example, in Viet Nam, It take people two years to master electrical skill compare to four year studying of electrical graduates. The more time you spend on studying, the more tuition fee you have to pay for education
On the other hand, the source of experts graduating from universities is always necessary for the development of country. In many particular field required mind-set and massive knowledges, a worker should be educated carefully in the long term to meet qulification needs. For instance, if a medicial graduate is not taught in-dept about human body by professionals. they would lack basic knowledge and cause detrimental health effects to the patients.
In conclusion, it seems to me that both vocational training and academic study in universities are worth taking into account for high school graduates thanks to aforementioned benefits
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3829787234 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04222253489 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645390070922 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2395598288 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.5 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9166666667 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278841959132 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880962929903 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502867043118 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149286985041 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411506109667 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.